Feedback

Today I managed to get 20 people to give me a mark with an appropriate level for my coursework, as well as any additional constructive comments they wanted to add.

Levels:

Out of the 20 people that were asked, below is the amount of people which awarded it which level

Level 1 - 0

Level 2 - 1

Level 3 - 14

Level 4 - 5

Overall the average level awarded was a level 3 which I am very happy with and feel is a fair grade to give my two minute film opening.

Various additional comments were given from the people which were asked, so below is a list  of points which came up;

Positive Comments:

·Lots of different shots

·Variety of ages for actors

·Looked visually professional

·Looked like a interesting story

·Good acting

·Music suited visuals

·Good transitions between the main dancer and the auditions

·Good plot

·Interesting locations

·Good mise en scene

·Original

·Good placement of poster

·Loved the tap dancer in the street

·Like where the dancing starts and tempo of music changes

·All shots are steady

·Good framing of shots

Negative Comments:

·More mise en scene could have been included

·Ending too sudden

·Shots too similar

·Music repetitive

·Could have included some transitions

·Main character laughing at the start

·Music doesn't edit together correctly

·Too many shots of people walking

·Took awhile to understand the meaning

·Build up to main part of video takes too long

Discussing the feedback I received: